I learnt how to do the bar and I almost did it this time
I enjoyed doing the bar because I like to do the back clip
I also enjoyed jumping in the trampoline it's so fun
Dear Brielle. I like you the way said that you enjoyed the bar and the trampoline. You could also tell this to people that do not want to do something enjoyable in the bars and trampoline encourage them. you could put also put enjoyable instead of fun
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Dear Brielle. I like you the way said that you enjoyed the bar and the trampoline. You could also tell this to people that do not want to do something enjoyable in the bars and trampoline encourage them.
ReplyDeleteyou could put also put enjoyable instead of fun